I have been writing poems for quite some time in tamil (which happens to be my mother tongue).But I have not seriously tried to make one in English.Today I thought about it and made a poem.The title of the poem is My little rose.This idea came to mind as I was gazing at the red rose in my garden.I wanted to share my poem with you.Hope you have the patience to read the full poem.
My little rose
My little rose ,
you look so happy....
You have been stolen,
From my garden.
My little rose
Yet,you look so happy!
Your thorns failed,
In saving you.
My little rose,
Yet,you look so happy!
You miss your friends,
You miss your mother,
My little rose,
Yet,you look so happy!
You are lying on my grave.
My little rose,
Is that why
you look so happy?
You look so happy....
This is my first poem.
This did not turn out as bad as I expected.
my little friend...:)
ReplyDeletenow i respect the writer in u :)
u've started better than most..keep up....
hmmm...thanks mate...
ReplyDeleteI have been writing poems for the past 6 years but this is the first one in English...
why did you die???
ReplyDeletebeacuse this world is a graveyard...my home is equal to a grave da....I am in my home only...
ReplyDeleteRather than bringing a normal cliche into the poem i tried something different...
ok... good theme... write lines about this theme too da.. anyway good head start
ReplyDeleteya...once Pa.Vijay wrote...
ReplyDeleteOn Tajmahal...
In tamil
"ulagam sudukaadu aanathu
Kalarai athisayamanthu..."
Same in english...
"World became a grave,
Graveyard became a world wonder..."
Such an inspiring one..
Just two lines..
But such a nice one...
hmmm...me think the poem was good...but u shud stick to techie stuff!!! hehe
ReplyDeletecheers
just a breath of fresh air...for a change...
ReplyDeletethe rose is happy coz it got such a nice poem dedicated t it....
ReplyDeleteActually the poem was written keeping me in my mind...
ReplyDeleteThe rose is my self conscience..
It is unable to prevent me from doing mistakes...
Still it is happy thinking it could correct me...
That is the actual meaning of the poem...
thanks....
ReplyDeletedont post your comments as anonymous next time...
beautiful :)
ReplyDeletekeep writing :)
Kutti, ur poem is really good as U
ReplyDeletenice poem da..
ReplyDelete@prachi,sasi anna and Sharanyan...
ReplyDeleteThanks...